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WARNING!

The consumption of alcohol may make you think you are creating a good flash.

money..

it's not very often you get to see frame by frame animation on this site....especially as clean as that. mad props. one of my rare 5s i award you.

ssssss...aight

dude..thats tite to see some frame by frame animation for once...everyone seems to abuse the motion tweens so much. as for the rest of the film...i think i'd rather go watch the movie........but hey, don't get down on yourself, your film makes me appreciate the movie that much more.

i know that took a decent amount of time to make..

and its a shame cause the thing came out dumb as shit. ... HOWEVER... somehow....some.....way....... ...it made me feel happy or optimistic inside....

i guess ill give it a better than average rating...oh lucky you.
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.ps...i think it was music choice...which i think is so crucial in this business.
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.pss...did i mention i thought the entire story was stupid??

dude....

this spider in my apartment caught a bee in its web and the SAME THING HAPPENED!!! I couldnt believe it....only the bee in my apartment grabbed some of thos shrrooooomies and shared em with me.. talk about a trip! anyway...i thought your video was unique. I liked two of the angles and i liked several of the effects. it was put together well. keep up the better than average(and unique) work.
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ps--dont mix pain killers with alcohol...its not recommended by doctors.... uhhhgggrrggghhh.....

dude....EXCELLENT style...

excellent style but the music just didnt work with this....

clean

man, i love your animation style....its so fluid and the camera angles are on point!
what do you use to illustrate your toons with? a graphics pen? keep up the animations on NG... i enjoy watching them.

DocMonster responds:

Thanks for the good word! Compliments from a fellow animator are awesome!
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To answer your question, I sketch the characters in pencil, scan 'em in, clean 'em up in Illustrator and import them to Flash. It's a lot of steps, but I feel it gives me the most control over what the characters will look like.
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Your stuff is impressive! Keep it up!
Maybe one day, when we're not bogged down by personal and professional projects, we may be able to collaborate! All the best!

decent

The animation style and artistic talent were great. However i must say the storyline blew, the joke bombed, and it wasnt very funny. Some of the little things were funny, but the punchline at the end wasnt. Work out the written part more before animating your next one. .. However, i do definitely look forward to your next short.

DocMonster responds:

Thanks for the kudos and the constructive crit! This was a toon I needed to get out of my system since it tested a lot of the things I had learned and discovered in Flash. After watching "Bye Bye Bunny", I'm sure you can relate. The jokes are there, but they just don't quite hit home.

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